Using MS Paint I did a quick edit of the way I was envisioning your tank with a few minor improvements. Sorry for the bad quality of edits I didn't have time to clone the background properly.
The bylaxa looks good on the right side now, its got definition and isn't overwhelming. The new driftwood you added is positioned really well, but I feel like it is too big of a piece, the thickness of the wood draws the eye and sort of dominates that area especially since the branch goes all the way up to the surface. If you have another branch the same shape, but thinner and shorter I think it would look just right there. Having one focal point is usually the way to go and the wood in the middle that reaches the surface is that focal point (all the wood points up to that area which draws the eye there).
I think the left side of the tank should loosely mirror the right side in terms of plant species. So I think that the myrio you have in the back left corner should be taken out and probably replaced with the rotala that is all over the right side of the tank. Just a little bit poking up at the top to give the tank a bit of symmetry.
Then the bottom left side might look good with a little clump of bylaxa and maybe one or two stems of downoi (pogostemon helferi).
Also another piece of thin drift wood on the left side in all that greenery would add to the design I think. And the single stem plant that is growing across the middle valley should be removed since it distracts the eye from the focal point (driftwood at surface).
Hope you don't mind my suggestions. I think you have made a really fantastic scape so far. Looking forwards to seeing how it changes over time.