I know you tore it down, but I think the spirit of it was very good. I think the only thing that could have been changed was that the left grouping be moved closer to the right grouping. As you had it, you have two groupings equally spaced. I think by putting them the same distance from the walls, you beg for a symmetry which leads to people asking you to make the left side more prominent. If they aren't exactly symmetrical, but instead balanced by an asymmetrical layout (in both distances and size) you might be better served.
-Adam |