[davemonkey]

Now that you've moved things around, I think it looks good. Even in the first pic the only thing I would have done is add more Sag to the front left corner. Your designer eye is better than you think. The ONLY thing I would change is put something tall and 'red' in the back right corner to even out the visual "weight". But, even if you don't do that, it still looks good. You have to look at it in the future tense. (ie. What will those plants grow into in the next couple months?)

You're doing good. Keep it up.