Very nice-got goal number 1-the plants did grow, and they are aquascaped to some extent, but it is still a bit sloppy. Sorry about the darkness-and note that banana plant is no longer there(in the pond).
Some things I want to change:
Remove H corymbosa augustifolia stand which is being choked out by the elodea and replace it with all the Najas that is floating around.
Either find a way to trim the java moss foreground low or try something else.
I will post other thoughts as they come.