[richy]

nice. i like the rock formations on the 2nd one, but the plants look misplaced. it's either too bare on the right side or too much on the left. maybe it's the plant selection. i don' t know if you were going for a "natural" look, but i'd rethink the plants possibly? the rocks and plants don't jive together. perhaps removing some of the rocks?

i like the first one, too. the splash of red in the mix looks great.

i'm a relative beginner myself and u're still one up on me (ur plants look great). so hope you don't mind the critique. =)

 

[richy]

the 10G looks a lot better with more foliage covering the foreground. the rocks don't look so overpowering of the whole scape. the plants on the left side might look better if they were bunched closer together or when it grows out more. i like to see the riccia piece in the foreground also after it's grown out.

the rescaped 18G looks a lot better. i like it. 8) i'd like to see how the diandra looks when it grows out a little more and some of the red comes out.