Conceptually the composition works, but it looks a bit too tight for a photo. By this I mean another week or two of growth would have rendered the it a bit more wild and sublime (to use an excellent term of Jeff Kropp's). The direction is good, but the stem plant arrangemant in the left corner is just not quite there (yet) for me. Also the wallichii is bit on the spindly side. I love the hairgrass foreground, though...very nice.